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When a Bulb breaks...

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this is my first photo-manipulation...hope i did well!:):highfive:

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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

For your first photomanipulation this very good!

The final piece immediately caught my attention, and only after a while I noticed a few things that I have to comment on now: It's the repetitiveness of the tiny lightbulbs and the patterns of smoke. I wouldn't say they're overly done (like another critic said), but you did use the same effect too often. Most noticeable are the streaks on the bulbs. Add in some variation and you're gold.

As for the rest, I do like it a lot. Placement of the bulbs (including the big one) and smoke is spot on, and there's also a lot of depth.

One final note: add some filmgrain, just a bit, and I bet it would look even more real (and thus surreal).